It’s okay

nice

for a first.I want to make some comments:

1) It could use a story
2) U should really start drawing better or ask somebody else
3) the music was ok

keep improving your skillz.

That ok

Good job by the way good.

ok

You have good ideas... kep working on flash.. you will become much better and have some success!

If you keep working on these I will stick them into the up coming horror / dark section on newgrounds

5

Wow, bad graphics, and terrible sounds. Ok, really. Your graphcis are different, not terrible. As for the sounds, they are not that great. I hate that scream. The "aa aah ahhhh" scream. I really get mad when people use it. I hope in future animations you work more on your grahphics instead of just trying to be scary.

Ryan