Needs quite a bit of work.
Its not too bad but try improving the graphics and making it longer.
Author Comments
made with flash 5 than put into flash 6 so the real video would work. I know its filled with tons of imperfections.
Enjoy.
Music is Duels of Fate and O fortuna.
meh
E for effort, but...
ok
I gave you a 7 because I thought it was fine. But you messed up on one part and that is the ending. If you were to be hit by a light saber you would not bleed. It is a laser which would culdarise the wound(means it wont bleed). Why do you think there is not a lot of blood in Star wars. It is because you would not bleed if hit by a blaster or saber.
little tips
i always give credit to people who do live animations cause ive done them and they can be hard when done right.
some helpful hints
dont just draw in shit. for this example you should have something like a stick that is close to the saber and then color it later.
another big thing slow down. do everything in slow motion and then spped it up later. that way you can get contact hits and everything and it just looks better.
one last thing. dont be afraid to retake shots. sometimes its better to do it right ya know.
-MW
Leetnet Admin
heh
Why won't you let your little bro make a nice move?
he was killed twice...
make longer of these...they are usually interesting...