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Kirby's Weightloss Adv.

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The real one will take awhile, but please review and tell me what you think so far. :-) me (JrdnGrn is AIM) and Alkor (GebirgsMorder) made this, IM us any time. I just put it under my name because he doenst have one.

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huh

I'm alittle confused about the point so if you could make a flash more to the point it would help me out alot thanks.

p.s. kirby was to small you should in

lacking

eh? kirby losing weight?
you should zoom up on him when he's doing chin-ups from the tree branch, he's too small on the flash screen, you should zoom on him in general.
not a bad start tho. I don't know where you're heading with this tho, a game? (ddrish?) or a toon? voice acting? for kirby?

I feel like I'm blind...

Not a bad concept but it was really REALLY blurry and you should have waited and released the whole thing. Build on the story and fix the graphics and you should be okay.

It was ok.

The movie was alright, I think you should have waited and put out the full one first since it will probably consist of the same stuff. The graphics seemed kind of blurry at times.

hehe

that was funny

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Aug 1, 2003
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