ok
not too bad trailer, but you might want to fix up the sound on it though.
Author Comments
Just to give you an idea of what the cartoon will deal with. This is a rough rough rough version of the final product. I assure you with the animation stylings of Jeremie Duval the cartoons will look ten times better
Speech
Yeah, clear up the speech. Also, might I suggest that you make your own preloader?
No point
The art was good, but for a trailer, you might want to put some substance in it. This was just a guy standing there while someone else talked. You also need to clear up the speech, or turn down the music.
what?
What is this about? Why is this a trailer if it doesn't tell me anything about the story? The sounds suck. Making a trailer is not just drawing a man and making him clip his eyes or move his mouth. "This had no redeeming qualities".
Well done
GOod but you need to improve clarity of voice or use subtitles in conjunction with your current voices.
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