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Toby (test movie)

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ok this is a movie that i started quite along time ago, but i havnt really done anything with it for a while. But it is practically finshed.... it just needs a middle. everything else is finshed i.e the menu, the gun menu, the begining, the end, and the credits. and before u give a me a 0 or somthing i would just like you to vote on whats there, and hopefully give me suggestions, thanks.
The basic story is that this guy, toby, comes home to find his girl frined has been terribly slaughterd. So then he has to avenge her death.


o and btw all the credits and things say 'HiM' that is my actual nick name but it was already taken on newgrounds. *mutters under voice* so dont go saying its nicked. Thanks.

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Can't wait for more

I like what I see thus far. The animation of the intro is nice as is the graphic style. The music cut out a bit suddenly, I would have liked to hear something in the back ground whilst I watched.

I was also a little bit dissapointed to see a stickman. The rest of the graphics are good and I'm sure you could manage something better than a stick man for the character.

I hope that you finish this soon. It has a lot of potential.

not bad

it was an alright test movie. nothing too exciting, but it was fun to watch and your efforts were good too.

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If you put scenes in, I know it would be a really good movie. But in the future, dont submit uncompleted flash. Its a waste of time and will get blammed.

This was a.................pice of SHIT!!!!!!!!!

This was the gayest thing I'v seen MAKE the full vertion and I'll reconsider. :( PICE OF SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Ohh nooooo

Come on .,,. I was sooo exited about this movie .. I THough it will be a hit.. but then the stick guy came again.. well I am not a fan of stick guys.. they are lazy acters.... you have talent.. you only need patiance and more work.. I am not tell in to change the stick guy.. I guess its ur stype like every author has his own.. but I reviewed this movie just becoz I Like the Begining,.. :)

check out my MOvies ... review them if you wanna right to me alright?
C_ya.... waiting for more

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Score
3.05 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 29, 2003
6:33 AM EDT