I created this small cartoon for some friends last month, based on our experiences in an online chat world.
I hope it will still be enjoyable to those not familiar with such worlds.
not bad just....
at the beginning you spelt loser wrong lol, and when he was on the phone with that japanese guy hes siad "gtg my macoroni and cheeze is ready" but yet he picks up a burger......... lol besides those tiny mistakes that were pointed out because i was bored and wanted to critisize it was a good flash, keep up the good work
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its good, too tired to type.
It was ok
That was alright. The animation was good. The sound was good. But it wasnt really all that funny.
Total Rubish !!!
You should give up your task as a newgrounds artist, because of the terrible work you have uploaded here...The graphics were really bad, but the sound made this terrible work stay on newgrounds. I don't think you have the inner - talent to improve your caliber. You know what... I have no idea what the hell i'm saying...I just thought it would me sound cool. Ergo, Vis avis, Concordantly...
I see you ran this review through the spell checker :) Bitter much?
Nice work.
It was pretty funny. Reminds me of my shitty apartment. I wish I had macaroni and cheese...