Pretty good!
It went really slowly in the beginning though.Well,it was funny,keep up the great work!:)
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You love it.
Okay, okay. I fixed some scripty problems. Everything should be honky-dorey.
Pretty good!
It went really slowly in the beginning though.Well,it was funny,keep up the great work!:)
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Ha! Nice!
Nice spoof for people who don't draw a lot of flash...so their cartoons can't do much...very unique! A little slow paced, but it kinda had to be for it's type of humor.
Constructive criticism
I can't give detailed tips, since I'm learning flash myself, but if you're using Flash MX, delete some of those frames between sounds. The voices and animation were great, but there were big gaps between actions. Try to make a faster paced vid next time, but this was still pretty good overall.
Characters have potential
Yeah you could make a series out of these characters they were well drawn and had good voice acting. There wasn't too much plot to this one but it was still funny. The pace of the animation definately should have gone faster. Good work.
Hmm..
Well, not much going on. But with those two characters, you could make a series.. But try to make it more interesting. You get a 10 rating for the character graphics. (Where ARE THEY, Anyways?)