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Desolation Teaser 2

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This is the same teaser that was on before, but was deleted because of it's massive file size. Now, I've optimized the audio so everyone can enjoy it and it won't destroy Newgrounds bandwidth. Enjoy! :)

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Ever heard of Trigun?

Reminds me alot of Vash and Nives' conflict from Trigun..........a little too much...


I dont like it.But im in the light mode.

i like.

it's good. really good voices, and overally, a great flash. =D

for a trailer its okay

I cant wait to see the finished product, the voices are some of the best I've ever heard in a flash production.

OOTC responds:

Thanks! :) We really put a lot of time into getting the voices right. It's really encouraging to get comments like this.

Hmmm, it's so-so.

It's nothing too amazing, but your plot seems interesting enough. Your visuals could really use some work, but if you've got a really really good story lined up, it can completely overshadow bad visuals for a lot of people (just look at the NG author Mark McPherson). Your voice acting is a little iffy, but I think you guys are headed in the right direction. I'm gathering, from what was said by the characters, that they are not of this world, or definitely different. So try not to slur words together in their diologue, it gives them too much of a human touch. I did like your audio choice, instrumentals always go pretty well with things like these. Hope to see your final product soon; good luck.

OOTC responds:

Thanks man! I wasn't expecting to get such a good reception but it seems people like it enough. This is really my first time doing flash which is why the drawings aren't too great. The trailer already has a ton more animation. You're right about the characters...you'll see when chapter one finally comes out. Again, thanks for the review and watch for my series in the future. :)

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4.14 / 5.00

Jul 8, 2003
2:18 PM EDT