TOTALLY AWSOME!!!!!
That was great! I don't what it was but it was great and i really liked it!
Author Comments
This is basically the other one with an added part. (I want to thank the guy who left the idea in the review if anyone esle has ideas to change/add or even for a new pierre film leave it review-style or email me at viciousdragon70@hotmail.com)
I love you, Pierre. (I'm so drunk.)
Overall, the humor outweighed the mediocre graphics (though I do like them). But I would recommend adding more subtitles to your work if your characters are always drunk (it's hard to hear drunken slurs. Good job. Make more.
The extra scene is good
The extra scene was really funny - I specially liked the bit where you look through Pierre's eyes.
I was a bit disappointed you removed the 3 pages of text though... ;)
Definitely better than the other one. The extra scene also helps with the pacing of the movie as a whole.
Grizzam responds:
Yeah ... Pierres still fairly new, one day Ill work ou tall the kink sand hell be awesome! lol
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Better than the first version, I will give you that. It explained a lot more.
Ryan
Grizzam responds:
apperntly everyone named ryan is cool
This needs work. A loooooot of work.
For starters, there is NO consitency with either the dialogue OR the artwork. It seems to switch from still photos to hand-drawn. You should really stick with one or the other, or learn to combine them more seamlessly. The dialogue should also be nothing but voice-overs, or nothing but captions. Also, the movie as a whole was very disorienting. The rambling Pierre was difficult to understand and some of Yoda's dialoue went by too fast to read. There's potential here, but the movie as a whole seems to stumble about as drunkenly as Pierre does.
Grizzam responds:
"but the movie as a whole seems to stumble about as drunkenly as Pierre does." haha i love it... A)its all handrawn except for his "hallucination" B)I already asked and am actually waiting until 11pm (my time) to get the guy to do yodas voice so no text at all
C)Pierres french-american, what do you expect?