done in MS paint?
the voice acting was great...that's about it. Definately put more work into your artwork, and um, even though its too short to tell, the script is very...how you say...overdone? think of something a little more original.
Author Comments
This short little teaser is for what I'm hoping will become a very popular series eventually. There isn't much but it took a while, and please bear in mind i'm still learning the in and outs of this program. Thanks for watching and keep your eyes peeled for the trailer! Sorry 'bout the file size I still gotta work on audio optimization :doh:
Its a very good trailer
Now just tune up your drawings a bit,and compress because this was wayy too short for such a big file.Then you will get a good score.But anyways this is just a trailer.
desolation?
1. why is his name an adjective?
2. good music choice
3. optimise sound
4. draw better
2 things.
1. Optimize your sound.
2. Learn to draw better.
Why.........
This move was like 20 seconds long and is 4224 kb. I find something terribly wrong with that. It's called SOUND OPTIMIZATION! There are a lot of BBS topics on it. With sound optimization this could be under 200 kb. You should also work on your drawing. The fact that it was a TEASER and there was NO SOUND OPTIMIZATION really killed your movie. It's crap like this that destroys Newgrounds' bandwidth.
OOTC responds:
Sorry. I'll optimize it for sure in the trailer and the rest of the series.
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