*generic NG viewer comment*

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and now for an intelligent review.

It was pretty impressive for a first time flash. I definitely think you should work on more stuff. The drawings were excellent but the sound was.....lacking......
lol maybe in your next film you can introduce a character or something.
good work

umm...

Yeah, that was not wery good...With drawings like that, you CAN make better man.

dude

Good idea, i give it a 3. It needs sound, like spmeone else said, some crushing, and maybe more climatic. I mean i was just watching a ball roll for 25 sec.

GRRRRRR

I NEED PEOPLE GETTING CRUSHED!!!!!!

try again

you need a conclusion or some type of plot, though you are onto somthing