it probably would have been like 9 times better if you didnt give it that annoying voice..... i closed it before the end of the first 'fanmail' letter... also.. you might not want to drag it on so much like that.... i get very impatient when it comes to shorts and well.. this toon literally irritated me.... you've got the right idea and everything.. just need a bit of tweaking....
Foamy toons should be as long as this one. I love satire. Good work. (5)
I couldnt get through this. Took way too long. The way IllWillPress looked and spoke was the only slightly amusing part. Bad flash. Waste of time. Dont watch this.
This was only funny because of the way "illwillpress" looked and the way his voice was. xD
My ears bleed...
TOO SLOW... you (or whomever) spoke too slowly, making the letter entirely too long.
NOT FUNNY... at all, try to get some non-bashing humor in there.
RECYCLED ANIMATIONS... Recycled animations are like those recycled notebooks, they fall apart before you can do anything with them. I know you were trying to mimic foamy's tendancy to bounce around here and there, but he talks 100 miles a minute and lasts only for a minute or so. Try to clean it up, make it a little more interesting, recycle the jokes if you want to but IN THE NAME OF CAFFEINE quit with the drawl.
FIX IT... please.