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An Outrageous Act

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This is my first Flash movie ever and even though it sucks ass I still tried so please goe easy on me, okay?

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JessiCrux13 responds:

He totally should. I made it when I was 16. I'm 37 now LOL.

The graphics are okay, but the background should not be plain white. Animation could be much smoother. This is not bad for your first flash movie.

Interesting

Very simplistic in nature; not visually impressive, but it's still interesting at least. I feel like this would be much better with sounds/voices. It could use a preloader too.

Could be better

Ok so notbad on a first try, but could use some improving on stuff, like for starters you could add some backrounds, sounds, a preloader so it doesnt loop all the time, and some improved animation, even throwing in some vocals wouldnt hurt either, now these are just some ideas, but its a start to make this much better then most, but other then that i was lightly entertained on what you have here, hope to see more soon.

Some ideas of making it better, as mentioned, add some backrounds, sounds, a preloader so it doesnt loop all the time, and some improved animation, even throwing in some vocals wouldnt hurt either

Voice acting

Unless this is a documentary with sound effects and text, you need to voice act. That being said, it would not have been that good with it. The text at one point went by too fast. I coudn't even read it. The rest of the speed was ok.

The witch chick was ugly. I need something good to look at. Cat was alright. Now the story was just awful. Yea he dosn't like it. So let's just kill him. Oh wait! He's a magic cat!!! Ok he's gone. THE END. Really bad. Try something better next time.

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6,099
Faves:
5
Votes
25
Score
2.44 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 16, 2001
5:50 AM EST