Overall this is really solid and good, but a review ain't a good one unless I can give you some tips.
First off, I know it's just a personal preference but I wouldn't use solid black outlines, maybe try using a really dark green, blue or brown. Or whatever color you want, but in the result it makes the cartoon have a nicer softer feel. ALSO, just try doing smaller outlines, zoom in more when you draw, or draw things bigger in general.
It's been said before too but Link's voice had fuzz and static in the background. You could buy a better microphone to fix that, or you could build some sort of fort, put your microphone in there and THEN record. in a small enclosed space it doesn't record as much sound. It works. I tried it.
Aside, from the quality there was a couple parts that seemed to have cheesy acting, the only part of this I can remember is when Zelda flew into the tornado. But overall it's good.
none of the jokes made me laugh, but I haven't played this game, nor do I know hardly anything about it so I assume all the jokes just flew over my head.
The sound effects were great btw. I think that was my favorite part about this is the use of those. Overall it was pretty solid, can't wait for episode 2! If there is one.