Oh My God Yes!
That was amazingly written. I liked how you mimicked egoraptors style of animation. The flash was short and to the point, it flowed quite well. All though I did feel like you held back on the voices, I would have like to see more emotion portrayed through the voices. Overall it was very enjoyable. 5/5 9/10
PS. keep animating. You have talent I would love to see more.