ehrm..

i don't want to make anyone look bad especially the author "ehem". look dude, either this was your first attempt or something else, i'd say that practice makes perfect (or at least near perfect). but anyway, there are still many things to learn dude. it'll take time but you'll get there.

Try a lil harder

The cabbie was kinda funny but the rest was just crap. I mean you probly knew that this thing was crap when you submited it and maybe you think it is funny to submit crap like this just so someone wastes a few seconds of their life on something so utterly retarded that they accually lose an I.Q. point, but all you are doing is bring down the good name of Newgrounds with this turd. I award you no points and may god have mercy on your soul.

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Absolutly horribly. Just plain stupid. Don't waste your time.

...huh?

That was over reeally quickly the style is nice though I like how your characters are structured. Keep it up

poopie

i didnt like it but practice makes perfect,and before you say "flash is hard yadda yadda yadda"im working on flash right now,and yes it is very hard