At 7/26/07 12:54 PM, Phantom wrote:
May I recommend we discouragre one line and especially one word posts, I've found it gives the thread a more intelligent side from my knowledge...
Oh, sorry for that. Anyway, I've written some more, hope it's good...
Then the faint foice of an announcer can be heard:
Announcer: People of the Empire, today is the opening of the great tournament, which brings fighters from far and wide to battle for the grand title of ''Champion of Gladiators" .
We hear a low roar of the crowd, which slowly materializes into the seats of the arena, crowd grows louder as the announcer speaks.
Announcer: From Mazuma comes the confident, the young, Lucern!
Crowd cheers, blue flowers rain down on him.
Lucern: (smiles, thrusts up his right hand)
Crowd begins to chant: Lucern, Lucern.
Announcer: ( raises hand to silence crowd, which takes a moment.) And from Carnalia, the dark, the fearsome, Karnalgio the Mace!
Crowd sharply stops cheering and starts to boo. (fully materialized)
Announcer: ( raises hand up again, but booing doesn't cease.)
Karnalgio: (makes the religious signal of his country)
Booing comes to a halt as the Emperor steps into his view. He wears a small frown, but is secretly happy as the crowd goes into a cacophony.
Emperor: ( holds up a small red cloth)
Crowd suddenly stops cheering, waiting.
Emperor: ( drops cloth)
The match starts, the crowd chants Lucern's name again.
The two figures start walking toward each other, ready to battle.
We hear intro to Pink Floyd's ''Obscured by Clouds''.
Just so no one gets confused, the Empire is not Roman, nor the Emperor. Also, I'm taking a vote on who should win the battle, Lucern or Karnalgio, so just pm me and tell me who should win.