This is an epic poem I wrote for school- It's only the first draft and I threw in lines sporadically, so basically it's far from complete. there are a few spots where there's "-" in place of actual verses or stanzas, which are just spots I have yet to complete. I also intend to improve the grammar of the whole thing and eliminate alot of the "and" and "as" words that begin most of the lines to make it appear less like a list of bullshit. It uses a pretty basic rhyme structure, alternating between ABAB and AABB.
Please respond guyz.
922 words, 4926 characters so far.
Part I: Countdown to the End
On one morning, peaceful day
the countdown does begin
and as apocalypse awaits
the man with the sign says 'ten'
Their is no sign as life goes on
But the Earth silently whines
The birds still sing a sweetly song
The man with the sign says 'Nine'
the dogs will bark
As the final days await
the horsemen will begin to lark
The man with the sign says 'eight'
And as the sinners begin to pray
one last "ah-men"
they look up and away
The man with the sign says "seven"
the kingdom then is in the know
And as the doomsday clock does tick
the animals scatter to and fro
The man with the sign says 'six'
As another day does pass
Sinners thank God to be alive
But the timer ticks alas
The man with the sign says 'Five'
A million souls will beg to be let in
As heaven begins locks its doors
As god's rule then is questioned
The man with the sign says 'four'
And as a fierce wind does blow
A rumbling starts at sea
and as the warnings still grow
The man with the sign says 'three'
as our race comes to terms
and there's nothing we can do
the earth begins to shake and squirm
The man with the sign says 'two'
The clouds arise and turn to dark
And the end has just begun
the horsemen begin to disembark
The man with the sign says 'one'
The day is dark and grass is dead
and there will be no more heroes
the sun will rise and the ends ahead
Because the man has said zero
Part II: Apocalypse
As it starts the forests die
and the chasm unlids its eye
and death begins to kiss its lips
and the world welcomes the apocalypse
A torrent in the mainland seeps
as ocean begins to reap
and water then covers the land
and the flood does then give its hand
And from the earth a mighty roar
as the ground begins to rip and quake
and in the air souls begin to soar
as the world begins to break
And as our reign comes to an end
And as we ponder what we are
Looming on the horizon descends
and nearing comes a falling star
the Earth then is in perfect harmony
lending itself to tragedy
It is it's one last joy
To be the ends one Envoy
Part III: Sleep
And after we then meet
our final end at hand
The earth begins to sleep
calming the savage lands
the birds do sing
and the flowers bloom
heavens bells do ring
and rebirth is on the loom
and from the deep rubble
stirs the worlds last life
the worlds last hope bubbles
as men and women and children come alive
not even the world could stop their love
not hells fury nor the gods above
the families innocence is burned
and there is no lesson to be learned
but through their hope they build again
a society thats free from pain
and no one there to take away
but no one there to pave the way
aimlessly they start a town
no laws or police to keep from crime
no man to lead them with a crown
and all this at the same time
as four cosmonauts revolve the earth
nothing there to give them worth
no reason to even believe
that in the sky, four people grieve
Part IV: Space
But as this all came to light
four men and women looked below
lost in orbit and in flight
the astronauts have lost their home
no contact and solitude
no rations nor even food
god abandoned them in the sky
and only he knows why
as the air inside begins to lapse
and violence starts to corrupt
a small spark begins to clap
and in their prison fire erupts
they say in space there is no noise
no one could hear the girls and boys
but if you could change those laws
you would hear their hopeless caws
the endless vacuum drains their life
the pressure crushes their hold
As their end shall come to light
their lives are gone just like our world
Part V: Mu
And what was humanity's last wish?
As doomsday was unleashed
Their words were just prayers on wind
As they begged to be forgived
But oh human's last hopes
begin to spread anew
And as its last remnants elope
to the isle of Mu
Part VI: New hope
All their rage is cast aside
all their hate kept inside
bigotry and racism gone
only hope and love still shone
death echoes loud to a shout
as it starts to grow their doubt
their trials are hard and their lives are short
but they make the most out of their work
humanity begins again
and man and man are friends
all their emotion fall astray
and hate dissolves and fades away
But oh the greed behind their eyes
and shameless crimes and hurtful eyes
and corporation begins takes ahold
As man repeats the problems of old
Part VII: The End
Electricity does begin to give
an ever glowing light
but oh the world does not forgive
another deadly blight
But oh pollution seethes the lakes
as they repeat the same mistakes
and forest again begin to die
As the earth quietly cries
And as the humans begin to grow
an ever expanding borough
Gods rage then begins anew
and anger then does he stew
and the ticking hands start up once more
as the clock begins again
And just as it was foretold by lore
the man with the sign says ten