I think that's enough feedback, time for a new chapter:
Sarai ran up the stairs, she should've been tired, she had been running for a good bit, but some inner force, was driving her. Something mystical.
She came to the door of the Q-zar arena. It had buckled, and would be almost impossible to open. She looked around, and saw a sign saying "Staff Only." She rammed the door with her shoudler, breaking the lock. That wasn't right.. Sarai was a girl, quite dainty in fact, she shouldn't be able to smash open a door...
There was no time for this. She pressed on, praying that the boys were still alive.
Aaron was shocked. He had expected a bloody corpse at the worst, but somehow, this was even worse than that.
Eric stood there, perfectly unharmed. He had a slight glazed look in his eyes, but otherwise, he was unharmed. He walked over to Aaron and simply stood there.
"Dude, you okay?" asked Aaron.
Eric simply stared blankly back at him.
"Eric? you ther-" Eric punched Aaron in the face. Aaron staggered back, tasting blod, and probing around his mouth with his tongue. Sure enough, two of his teeth were broken. Aaron spat them out, along with a pool of blood.
"What the hell?! Why did you p-" Eric leapt up, twirling so that he faced away from Aaron. he sent his right leg flying out, striking Aaron square in the chest. Aaron flew back several feet, far more than he should have. This was ridiculous, Eric had become in-humanly strong.
Aaron sat, his back propped up against one of the pillars, struggling to breathe. The kick had knocked the air out of him, and he was breathless.
Eric Bent down, assuming a sprinter's starting position. Aaron knew what was coming, but he was too weak to stop it.
Eric burst into a sprint, his legs moving with an unfathomable speed.
Aaron mustered the little energy left in his body, and flung himself to the right, just in time.
Eric smashed into the pillar, his shoulder ramming into it. Shockingly, the pillar snapped, and came crashind down.
Eric turned, and Aaron could see fire in his eyes, he was pulsing, his veins physically bulging with the energy. Eric growled, and for a moment, his mouth grew, streched, into a wolven like shapre, but it quickly returned. Something was inside of Eric, and it wanted to escape...
NEW PLACES!!! There will be an opening soon for two more characters. Don't PM me, if you want to be in it, post in this topic. I cannot work on a 1st come, 1st serve basis, so if you want to be in it, tell me why I should pick you.