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Halo Flash. feedback wanted 2006-10-16 22:36:45


Installation Seven

this is the halo flash im working on. not much so far.

note: its a bit laggy in some parts. the beginning as one chunck of text u might not be able to read in the alotted time. there arent any voices or sfx yet. just the background music.

Response to Halo Flash. feedback wanted 2006-10-16 22:47:58


lol. holy shit kid. are you going to be making a new thread every time you get a couple extra seconds done or what?
http://www.newground../topic.php?id=587709


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Response to Halo Flash. feedback wanted 2006-10-16 22:53:05


no actually. -_-'

Response to Halo Flash. feedback wanted 2006-10-16 22:55:07


i actually doubled it in length. excluding the stupid text in the begining. im trying to get creative feed back. all i really got last time was cool. good job. all that stuff. it doesnt mean that much.

Response to Halo Flash. feedback wanted 2006-10-16 22:56:30


At 10/16/06 10:55 PM, Silvac wrote: i actually doubled it in length.

you can double the length of a 1 inch penis but its still not something you would go around showing people now is it?


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Response to Halo Flash. feedback wanted 2006-10-16 22:59:00


are u done yet?

Response to Halo Flash. feedback wanted 2006-10-16 23:00:29


At 10/16/06 10:59 PM, Silvac wrote: are u done yet?

whatever man. it looks good, now stop being such an attention whore and go finish it.


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Response to Halo Flash. feedback wanted 2006-10-17 01:32:57


Warning all media must suck less then 50 percent from last time to submit it in new thread. Otherwise. Just go to the first one and stop annoying people

Response to Halo Flash. feedback wanted 2006-10-17 06:04:05


I liked it, but the text seemed to take ages and AGES to go away >:(
Penboy

Response to Halo Flash. feedback wanted 2006-10-17 06:14:15


Yeah doode looks good. But there aint much to go off init. But its looks cool so far. So like...are you going to do the voice acting yourself?


they are turning us into terrorists

Response to Halo Flash. feedback wanted 2006-10-17 11:00:14


im not doing any voices. maybe creature sounds but thats it. ive got a few actors but ill need more eventually. im more worried about sfx right now.

Response to Halo Flash. feedback wanted 2006-10-17 11:24:55


Ooooo right I see, well if want them all i can say is FindSounds and
FlashKit .

And if worst comes to worst Google .


they are turning us into terrorists

Response to Halo Flash. feedback wanted 2006-10-17 15:25:38


that was pretty bad
the beggining, when the pods or whatever are flying down, it was like 20 seconds of the same movieclip and the fire should have had a filter on it, that's what made it lag.
the entire thing was 1 movieclip, a shit load of text, and then a head moving. why would you show us that?


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Response to Halo Flash. feedback wanted 2006-10-17 15:34:33


At 10/16/06 10:56 PM, 23450 wrote:
At 10/16/06 10:55 PM, Silvac wrote: i actually doubled it in length.
you can double the length of a 1 inch penis but its still not something you would go around showing people now is it?

Best.Analogy.Ever

ok fine not ever, but its in the top 10 ;)

Response to Halo Flash. feedback wanted 2006-10-17 15:41:23


At 10/16/06 10:47 PM, 23450 wrote: lol. holy shit kid. are you going to be making a new thread every time you get a couple extra seconds done or what?
http://www.newground../topic.php?id=587709

lol

Response to Halo Flash. feedback wanted 2006-10-17 15:49:46


At 10/16/06 10:55 PM, Silvac wrote: i actually doubled it in length.

It trebled for me. Turn off those damn filters!

I love you low quality option. Yes I do. Saves my poor 2.5ghz 2gb ram computer from lagging on Flash...

And the intro is hideously boring to sit through and read. Don't expect anyone to sit patiently and read anything unless the font's big, yellow, and moves towards the top of the screen to vanish with John Williams music in the background. And even then you need to be George Lucas to pull that one off.

Show. Don't tell.

Didn't look that bad otherwise. The frame by frame character needs more detail and more inbetweens to pass as recognisable though.


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Response to Halo Flash. feedback wanted 2006-10-17 20:28:18


Stop being a jerk silvac at least he has better art than you and no it wasnt the same movie clip over and over again he showed me retard now get a grip that you cant be the best on drawing and animating jerk ass.


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Response to Halo Flash. feedback wanted 2006-10-17 20:49:44


that was a bit over the top gary. didnt ask u to do that.

anyway. i did get something out of it.

>Didn't look that bad otherwise. The frame by frame character needs more detail and more inbetweens to pass as recognisable though.

>that was pretty bad
the beggining, when the pods or whatever are flying down, it was like 20 seconds of the same movieclip and the fire should have had a filter on it, that's what made it lag.
the entire thing was 1 movieclip, a shit load of text, and then a head moving. why would you show us that?

for the most part the critique from these two was good. thats the stuff im looking for.

-no it wasnt the same movie clip. each was individually animated.
-the fire did have a filter on it
-the fire filter did cause the lag, that and the fire symbols animation
-the text is too much. im still working to shorten it or make a skip button that will also skip through a chunk of the audio as well
-the thing is actually 5 separate scenes. for organization purposes.
- i showed u all this shit so hopefully i would atleast get some helpful critique, and
i got some.