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ME1233

Member since: Apr. 9, 2019

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Rate my verse 2019-04-26 18:48:40

Be helpful

Waiting

And waiting

All of its for you

I don't get to see you

Till, someone else comes for you

And if i do it a nice realization

That nothing is to take advantage

Making myself more organic

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davidpuralocura

Member since: Aug. 23, 2009

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Response to Rate my verse 2019-05-07 19:01:12

too many yous at the end i would say

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