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PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess)

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Hi. Been working on a webcomic for a few months. Figured I'd post it here n' stuff. I *try* to update once a week (every saturday usually). Tell me whatcha think and what can I improve (or not, idk, just do, like, whatever man).

Gon dump all the pages I've done so far now, so yeah...

Cheers.

If the pics look a bit blurry, they look pretty crisp here.

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Oh links in my signature btw.

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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-08-04 18:27:58


Nothing to say, just posting stuff

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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-08-04 18:28:46


Yeah...

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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-08-04 18:29:26


Uh huh

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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-08-04 18:30:30


yup

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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-08-04 18:31:14


right

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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-08-04 18:32:31


just posting...

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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-08-04 18:33:18


skirt

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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-08-04 18:33:58


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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-08-04 18:34:38


lots of words in this page

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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-08-04 18:35:16


its a bike

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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-08-04 18:35:46


click click

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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-08-04 18:36:12


idk

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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-08-04 18:36:43


Alright, that's all for now folks.

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Ignore this, accidently replied. Sorry.


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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-08-11 14:16:09


page 15

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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-08-18 11:34:55


new pagerino


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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-08-18 13:32:46


I know it's real nitpicky, but as a stickler for writing and realism I absolutely despise how White Shirt Man is standing dead center of the road without cover and is unharmed by the armed men shooting him.

That nibba'd be dead. If you can in the future, present White Shirt Man with some more severe danger. And give him some cover or advantage that would explain his invincibility (like a device that repels bullets or a shield or a big rock)


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At 8/18/18 01:32 PM, Spedmallet wrote: I know it's real nitpicky, but as a stickler for writing and realism I absolutely despise how White Shirt Man is standing dead center of the road without cover and is unharmed by the armed men shooting him.

That nibba'd be dead. If you can in the future, present White Shirt Man with some more severe danger. And give him some cover or advantage that would explain his invincibility (like a device that repels bullets or a shield or a big rock)

lol yeah I agree tbh. It's poor writing on my part. He does get shot a couple of times (once in the chest, back and the helmet), but it's still a bit dumb. I didn't plan out this chapter that much, but I'll make sure to be more careful in the following chapters.

Also, he does get a shield of sorts eventually ;^)

Anyways, thanks for the criticism, much appreciated.

Cheers!


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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-08-25 15:29:15


something something another one

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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-09-01 14:25:42


had to go with a double page for this one. Sadly it'll look like shit here because the pic's width exceeds by a lot the margin limit, so it is what it is.

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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-09-08 14:20:35


oof

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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-09-09 11:12:56


At 9/8/18 02:20 PM, FEDEV wrote: oof

Reading this comic for a while, i like the way you do shading on your characters.
I would recommend making some poses look more dynamic (for example, when helmet guy gets shot by the police in the bike), and the background looks really rushed.
Other than that im enjoying reading this comic, and i will continue to do so!


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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-09-09 20:19:17


At 9/9/18 11:12 AM, redemer19 wrote:
At 9/8/18 02:20 PM, FEDEV wrote: oof
Reading this comic for a while, i like the way you do shading on your characters.
I would recommend making some poses look more dynamic (for example, when helmet guy gets shot by the police in the bike), and the background looks really rushed.
Other than that im enjoying reading this comic, and i will continue to do so!

Thanks buddy!
Yeah, some poses might look a bit stiff so that's something I gotta work on. The background is indeed rushed, partly due to the nature of it (it's basically a desert with some mountains so it's easy to draw) and because backgrounds aren't my forte. Buuuut that's something I also want to improve on!

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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-09-15 13:17:55


badabim badaboom here's a new pageroo

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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-09-15 14:29:06


At 9/15/18 01:17 PM, FEDEV wrote: badabim badaboom here's a new pageroo

Now that's a strong helmet hehe
PD: what program do you use to make this comic, i'm just curious?


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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-09-15 14:44:06


At 9/15/18 02:29 PM, redemer19 wrote:
At 9/15/18 01:17 PM, FEDEV wrote: badabim badaboom here's a new pageroo
Now that's a strong helmet hehe
PD: what program do you use to make this comic, i'm just curious?

its one thicc helmet.

I use Gimp 2.


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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-09-22 09:29:43


pew

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Response to PREDATHEOSIS (a webcomic i guess) 2018-09-29 13:19:25


new font!

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