At 12/31/17 03:02 PM, SoundBounce wrote:
Hey I was wondering if people could visit my profile and vote/review my work. Should only take 5min and I would greatly appreciate it!
Not bad! Your anatomy is pretty on point. However, your lineart, color choice, and shading need some work.
For lineart, try adding more width variation for your lines. In an area where there would be more shadow, use thicker lines. Also you should smoothen out your lines a little more. Don't just stick to thin lines unless it's part of your art style, but i don't think that's the case for your art.
For color choice, try using colors with similar tone. Honestly, it's hard to explain and I'm not that great with color choices, myself. You should look up how to use color choice and the try to find how to develop a good color scheme (or just look up
color palettes if you're lazy like me). It'll make the colors in your art more harmonious and it can make your art give off a certain vibe.
For shading, you should learn to establish an obvious light source and figure out how shadows work. Honestly, this is the hardest thing off all and it can take you years to actually know what you're doing when you're shading. For your art, I feel like you're trying to shade but your shadows aren't dark enough and they look kinda blurry. Try to cell shade (look this term up) which is the easiest technique of shading. Also, I advise to never use an airbrush tool to shade and try to smear your shadows as little as possible.
My art thread: https://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1428996