Hello! Recently, I've been trying to hone a visual style that I can confidently call my own. This, of course, includes character design. From some feedback I've been getting, I understand that the faces of some of the characters I've worked on are generally unappealing (this extends to the characters in these links below, but in hindsight, I'd chalk most of that up to wonky, inconsistent proportions and generally weak drawings):
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Gesundheit!
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Where Have YOU Been?
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I've finished the image I attached to this post much more recently. One criticism I've received is that they lack three-dimensionality, and I can definitely see that. Moving forward, are there more specific comments I can receive on what makes the FACES of these characters unappealing? Proportions, eye designs... anything you see that I'm not seeing, please let me know! Thanks so much for any critiques you can give!