At 1/23/17 08:58 AM, Redskin16 wrote:
The main thing I noticed with the robot is it's lacking a clear sense of depth in a few areas - mainly the torso. I'm not sure how far apart his upper chest and hips are, and I'm not sure if he's hunched over with his chest and arms in front of his legs and hips or if he just has a small torso and is standing upright.
Yeah I made the mistake of not nailing down my gesture/bones before adding detail. Definitely regret that.
I've still been working the robot, along with a couple other drawings, but I don't have the heart to starting painting over large details again to correct the errors. Thanks for the tips though dude, I'll keep that in mind for future characters.
Also here's where the forest BG stands right now: http://imgur.com/a/Tc5CG
I'm probably gonna work on both of em today
Edit: Looking at it now I think the problem is that the torso disk thing needs to be tilted upwards with the wire-y mass part of his torso, right now they are facing contradictory directions. I've redone that disk so many times I think maybe I can muster once more.