sup ppls
I understand it's supposed to be stylized but the anatomy of her torso is off and her pose looks a little unnatural. Your final colors and shading look good though, but I think you should spend some time just practicing rough under-drawing to help with your anatomy.
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At 7/27/16 09:02 PM, mrblack1986 wrote: i was trying something new tell me what you think
It has a cool style but I think the legs should go a bit further back because it dosen't look like she would keep balance like that
At 7/28/16 05:28 PM, Why-even-try wrote:At 7/27/16 09:02 PM, mrblack1986 wrote: i was trying something new tell me what you thinkIt has a cool style but I think the legs should go a bit further back because it dosen't look like she would keep balance like that
is this better?
sup ppls
At 7/30/16 03:45 AM, mrblack1986 wrote:At 7/28/16 05:28 PM, Why-even-try wrote:is this better?At 7/27/16 09:02 PM, mrblack1986 wrote: i was trying something new tell me what you thinkIt has a cool style but I think the legs should go a bit further back because it dosen't look like she would keep balance like that
Looks good, still a little off balance though.
At 8/31/16 01:12 AM, mrblack1986 wrote:At 8/29/16 12:12 AM, mrblack1986 wrote: supwhat should i do to improve this also i think i need to learn the settinging gimp or move sai
Asymmetrical, lacks anatomy, lacking in attractive aesthetic. It really is the same stuff as last time, friend.
At 8/31/16 06:03 PM, mrblack1986 wrote: heres something i just finish
This is a nice bunny lady rabbit, but there are somethings I think can help improve it.
Your shading is ok, but I've notice you stay and in the around same hue/saturation of your color and have a more monochrome shading to it. You should try changing the hue/saturation a bit more and maybe add more shading.
Also use different brushes for your shading like some air brushes and some hard brushes and mix your color a bit more.
Like Template said the anatomy could use some work. The clothes is shaped around her breast which shouldnt be the case unless it is specifically around each breast. Due to gravity the breast should go down more (the clothes are tight but that doesnt mean the boob goes up like balloons). While she is turned to the right (our left), the hip is turned to the opposite side but her right arm is on that turned hip and the elbow is like hidden behind her. That is very hard to pull off and has feeling like she is forcing her elbow behind her.
I added a critique picture to illustrate what im talking about. The first is the original, second is just a quick rough example of just changing the hue and saturation for the different colors. Third is just a rough sketch of what i would do, like the head isnt too elongated (this could pertain to your style), boobs, hips is a bit more defined, etc. Thought it might help.
