Hey,
I always liked drawing and started to draw on the computer. after a little bit of practice i made this.
could i have some feedback?
tnx,
Baked0ne
At 2/1/13 06:29 PM, baked0ne wrote: Hey,
I always liked drawing and started to draw on the computer. after a little bit of practice i made this.
could i have some feedback?
tnx,
Baked0ne
yes, you may.
this looks very flat and 2-d, part of it is because of the profile layout you chose and part of it is because of your colors. there is no lights or darks which denote depth, you need contrast.
At 2/1/13 06:33 PM, Template88 wrote:At 2/1/13 06:29 PM, baked0ne wrote: Hey,yes, you may.
I always liked drawing and started to draw on the computer. after a little bit of practice i made this.
could i have some feedback?
tnx,
Baked0ne
this looks very flat and 2-d, part of it is because of the profile layout you chose and part of it is because of your colors. there is no lights or darks which denote depth, you need contrast.
tnx for the feedback, iam ltrying to learn shading but it is pretty difficult. i thought i would start of with 2d. ive tryed to give it a little depth but it still looks flat. in my next drawing i would try to prefent that.
Your work does seem a bit flat, but it's an interesting take on the style. I would work on your effects, mainly shading.
looks like a delightful dainty little 1920's coupe you'd see in a slyvian chomet film or prof.layton game, but there are problems, we not really problems more aspects that could be included, firstly: the windows are a solid colour when really they should be transparent reflective surface, also as the car is metal its should have some highlights added, also headlights, unless the front has a mono light then I'll let you go on that one, yeah decently good, you've got potential.
At 2/1/13 06:29 PM, baked0ne wrote: Hey,
I always liked drawing and started to draw on the computer. after a little bit of practice i made this.
could i have some feedback?
tnx,
Baked0ne
nice colors, try another angle, like front 3/4
