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Visual Travesties

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Visual Travesties 2013-01-14 15:24:00


Hello people of the art forum I'm here with this topic for people to point out things I should improve on with my drawings, usually when I submit to the art portal with a drawing I get a one star and I sit there in awe wishing the person left a review on why he rated it one star but I digress, so hopefully I can get some clarity on what I need to fix from you guys and gals enjoy.

This picture will have a transparent background and I will fill the colors contrast and brightness

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-15 04:34:29


another one I'm working on anything to point out or fix?

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-15 04:38:44


I love robotic skeleton armies

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-15 14:55:39


Think I should work on this as well?

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-15 18:14:19


I went through your stuff, and honestly i see no reason why you should be getting low ratings. Many of your submissions are quite inventive, you have your own style and carry the ideas out pretty well... Maybe a few of the drawings seem rushed or unfinished, but then again, they're cartoons so agonizing over texture detail kinda defeats the point... So I don't really know man. Fuck the ratings.


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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-15 18:59:22


went through all your pics, theyre nice, and often enough funny. theyre a little sketchy and sometimes a little unfinished. they also arent really detailed, but still good.

only I dont understand the complaints about the scores. you average around 3,2 points I think, which is pretty high. your lowest score is 2,34 which is still high... sooo whats the problem?


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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-15 19:16:29


At 1/14/13 03:24 PM, PyroToaster wrote: usually when I submit to the art portal with a drawing I get a one star and I sit there in awe wishing the person left a review on why he rated it one star

I'd take ratings with a pinch of salt, since usually there's little thought behind them compared to a review. Especially since a few of your pics use a pair of tits as a thumbnail, and the people who target these pics tend to let their testicles do the voting rather than their brains.


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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-15 19:38:12


At 1/15/13 06:59 PM, Tomsan wrote: went through all your pics, theyre nice, and often enough funny. theyre a little sketchy and sometimes a little unfinished. they also arent really detailed, but still good.

only I dont understand the complaints about the scores. you average around 3,2 points I think, which is pretty high. your lowest score is 2,34 which is still high... sooo whats the problem?

Thanks for that, some of the ones I did rush for the sake of putting a picture out there but that won't be the case anymore. But please don't think of it as a complaint at all, Its just sometimes I wonder why I start off with a low score when I post something, so I thought I was messing up on something obvious but couldn't see it or improve it because no one mentioned why :B , also I didn't know you can look at your score average that's pretty cool.

Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-15 19:44:22


At 1/15/13 06:14 PM, RogueSoul wrote: I went through your stuff, and honestly i see no reason why you should be getting low ratings. Many of your submissions are quite inventive, you have your own style and carry the ideas out pretty well... Maybe a few of the drawings seem rushed or unfinished, but then again, they're cartoons so agonizing over texture detail kinda defeats the point... So I don't really know man. Fuck the ratings.

Wow thank you very much I apreciate it, and I probably wasn't clear, what I meant was I start off with low scores I didn't mean to make it sound like I get low scores all the time for my drawings my bad.

Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-19 10:24:28


here ya go

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-19 10:27:17


WIP

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-21 19:03:11


I think this needs more work

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-01-21 21:51:12


Almost done

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-06 23:01:05


Geez I almost forgot about this thread

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-06 23:06:41


Ill upload this sometime tonight hopefully, What are your guy's thoughts?

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-08 00:30:45


I hope I linked it right where it shows the pictures link lol here it is, what do you guys think?

Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-08 04:50:54


At 2/6/13 11:06 PM, PyroToaster wrote: Ill upload this sometime tonight hopefully, What are your guy's thoughts?

this robot's pretty cool, but seems like his top-half sorta floats, like his legs are maybe too puny for support so the shapes don't stick together in my head...i really like the gas-mask skull preceding it, tho.


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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-11 17:30:02


upcoming speedpaint

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-11 17:31:35


I always thought bats are the coolest animals

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-11 20:45:01


At 2/11/13 05:31 PM, PyroToaster wrote: I always thought bats are the coolest animals

I guess I haven't been lurking the forum enough lately because I don't think I've checked out your thread before but I really like what I see. Your characters are pretty damn zany. Nice work.


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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-11 21:05:16


I very much enjoy your style and themes.
Sorry I can't give you some solid critique. Best I can do is say keep it up.


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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-12 00:39:18


At 2/11/13 08:45 PM, Sockembop wrote:
At 2/11/13 05:31 PM, PyroToaster wrote: I always thought bats are the coolest animals
I guess I haven't been lurking the forum enough lately because I don't think I've checked out your thread before but I really like what I see. Your characters are pretty damn zany. Nice work.

Thanks man, much appreciated. Your artwork is damn fine too, you should upload more and I checked out your thread, I like the style of your characters.

Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-12 03:33:01


Dang, cool stuff, loving the style.


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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-15 19:00:23


Okay I finally made a new SpeedPaint of this pic

Hope you guys like it

Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-18 23:14:44


Wip

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-18 23:16:27


Think I got the perspective of the anatomy right?

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-18 23:17:46


Thats right I went there.

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Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-18 23:20:52


At 2/12/13 03:33 AM, maficmelody wrote: Dang, cool stuff, loving the style.

Thanks man much appreciated!

Response to Visual Travesties 2013-02-19 00:01:42


At 2/18/13 11:16 PM, PyroToaster wrote: Think I got the perspective of the anatomy right?

This was the most that I like and where psychedelic distortion
if you finish that picture you could win a discount of 50% in toilet paper of my part and 5 point of newground vote


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