Hello people of the art forum I'm here with this topic for people to point out things I should improve on with my drawings, usually when I submit to the art portal with a drawing I get a one star and I sit there in awe wishing the person left a review on why he rated it one star but I digress, so hopefully I can get some clarity on what I need to fix from you guys and gals enjoy.
This picture will have a transparent background and I will fill the colors contrast and brightness