At 11/12/12 01:44 AM, Solomon-Pider wrote:
Hey guys, I'm sort of new to newgrounds, and I want opinions on my artwork. I'll take any criticism that you can offer. I want to eventually be good enough to make my own comic series, possibly a web comic. I'll take any and all criticism for any and all of my artwork, but what I post here, I'd especially like opinions on. This first piece is a character that I designed specifically to try and make fantasy armor for a female warrior that was more functional than sexy.
Hey, I like what you have going on here. You've taken a really tough pose and done well with it. Are you planning to shade this? If not, that's really what's missing here. The colors are good, the linework is good, the pose is good, but there's no modeling to speak of, so the whole thing is very flat.
If I were you, I'd choose a light source, as well as a shading style (cell shading vs. realistic), and give this picture some depth.