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I Need Criticism!!

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I Need Criticism!! 2012-08-22 13:21:48


Here is a piece I did to practice painting in gray scale only to help myself understand depth. I have finished it and I would appreciate any constructive criticism to point out what I did good or bad. It would help me a lot as I just started painting bodies to this extent. I will keep all your words in mind for my next piece.

I will be adding color to the image later.

I Need Criticism!!

Response to I Need Criticism!! 2012-08-22 15:47:45


At 8/22/12 01:21 PM, Blud-Shot wrote: Here is a piece I did to practice painting in gray scale only to help myself understand depth. I have finished it and I would appreciate any constructive criticism to point out what I did good or bad. It would help me a lot as I just started painting bodies to this extent. I will keep all your words in mind for my next piece.

I will be adding color to the image later.

wow, why color? it looks nice in grey.

some issues with the pic from my perspective.

the big dude looks like he is flying, or bending over while standing on something? What I mean is that the legs of the vegeta dude and the giant can hardly be level.

somehow I feel that vegeta is standing in the foreground (probably related to the previous issue)

vegeta has a very flat butt??

arms are nice and bulky, but in comparison his chest looks kinda flat.

the vains on the big dude are ok, but they dont POP out, which is probably what you want.

there seem to be different lightsources, thats oke I like it, but somehow the chin of vegeta seems off in respect to lighting. I dunno maybe someone can be more specific.

great pic!


God invented evolution 'cause he couldn't do it all by himself! Awesome Tees!

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Response to I Need Criticism!! 2012-08-22 16:07:28


At 8/22/12 03:47 PM, Tomsan wrote: the big dude looks like he is flying, or bending over while standing on something?

That "big dude" is the Hulk.

Response to I Need Criticism!! 2012-08-22 16:11:33


At 8/22/12 04:07 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:
At 8/22/12 03:47 PM, Tomsan wrote: the big dude looks like he is flying, or bending over while standing on something?
That "big dude" is the Hulk.

who?


God invented evolution 'cause he couldn't do it all by himself! Awesome Tees!

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Response to I Need Criticism!! 2012-08-22 16:27:36


At 8/22/12 04:11 PM, Tomsan wrote: who?

You know, big green guy, smashes things, yells?

Response to I Need Criticism!! 2012-08-22 18:57:43


Looking at vegetas stance its very open, since the theme is hostile , his stance would benfit greatly if his body was slightly turning and have his hands protect his chest sides - not as evidently as a boxer say but a more protective. I would tell the viewer alot more whats going on.

Response to I Need Criticism!! 2012-08-23 20:29:34


Thanks everyone for the feedback.

@Cypress - I can't thank you enough for spotting out the oddities in my image. I'm going to do the modifications based on what you have listed. I will also add the fist of the Hulk. Thanks.

Response to I Need Criticism!! 2012-08-23 20:32:37


My bf saw this picture and he wants it. xD

Response to I Need Criticism!! 2012-08-23 20:49:38


At 8/23/12 08:32 PM, BeckyRawr wrote: My bf saw this picture and he wants it. xD

When it's done I'll post it on NG. Send me a PM so I remember to send it to you.

Response to I Need Criticism!! 2012-08-23 22:40:14


Response to I Need Criticism!! 2012-08-23 22:45:26


Thank would be awesome :3.
Thanks.

Response to I Need Criticism!! 2012-08-23 22:47:17


At 8/23/12 10:45 PM, BeckyRawr wrote: Thank would be awesome :3.
Thanks.

Check your inbox shortly :D While I'm online I'll send it to you