I like it! The one idea I do have though would be to consider having the guy's arms spread out sort of in that "this is mine" fashion of an air-hug. This probably a design thing but I'm not a fan of the Queen's legs disappearing behind the rock. As I redraw the torso and such in my head it doesn't add up.

At 3/7/13 11:49 AM, Tomsan wrote: anyway I am hoping someone is willing to give some pointers if needed. The rock is unfinished. I used fat black lines which is better if its a tshirt design, but since The faces are pretty detailed I am not sure if it fits. all ideas are welcome..

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/471bf1c765a68cb6fc422122 5a05d107

At 3/7/13 02:24 PM, maficmelody wrote: I like it! The one idea I do have though would be to consider having the guy's arms spread out sort of in that "this is mine" fashion of an air-hug. This probably a design thing but I'm not a fan of the Queen's legs disappearing behind the rock. As I redraw the torso and such in my head it doesn't add up.

Thanks mafic, glad you like it. I kinda like the idea of an ´air hug´, its a big change (for me) however, but ill look into it. The legs were longer in the start, but it didnt really look right then. I replaced the rock twice. I think though that I can color the rock in such a way the dimensions are a bit more realistic.

thx