Can I get some feedback?

[glimpee]

Hi,
I just finished my first non-loop song a couple weeks ago, and havn't gotten any comments or feedback like I hoped, so I though I would try to get some more proactively

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  This is my Yah

  by glimpee

  This is my Yah

  Song

  Dubstep

  840 Views

  PLAY

If I could get any feedback or ways to improve, I would love that

And also, how do I stop the Yah Synth to not go into a monotone (like in the opening) because when I was editing it, it was not like that

Thanks

[Rampant]

At 4/17/12 02:45 PM, glimpee wrote: Hi,
I just finished my first non-loop song a couple weeks ago, and havn't gotten any comments or feedback like I hoped, so I though I would try to get some more proactively
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/477371
If I could get any feedback or ways to improve, I would love that

And also, how do I stop the Yah Synth to not go into a monotone (like in the opening) because when I was editing it, it was not like that

Thanks

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[glimpee]

Read the rules: no self-advertising threads, please.

Sorry, I'm not trying to advertise, where can I get feedback on a finished piece?

[Back-From-Purgatory]

At 4/17/12 06:58 PM, glimpee wrote:

Read the rules: no self-advertising threads, please.

Sorry, I'm not trying to advertise, where can I get feedback on a finished piece?

You have to advertise to get feedback...

Just sayin'.

Also, all the relevant threads have already been linked to.