At 9/14/11 04:27 AM, sirhenrystudios wrote:
Why don't you let me know what "you" think Turkey, give me some feedback dude.
I'm enjoying the sparkly texture of his costume and his hair. Overall his colour scheme is great. I'm aware about the bobblehead thing, but I think it's forgivable. As usual, it depends on how comfortable you are when it comes to respositioning the character for another pic.
Not a fan of the text. It looks very basic when juxtaposed to your character, the line weights aren't uniform and the text is unsure whether it's being sucked into a single point or not. The "wesome" of "Awesome" is teeny tiny compared to the other letters (especially the "A"), which is bizarre considering that's the most important word in his name.
I also don't liking shading to black. It's ok on the blue, but it makes the lovely yellow boots look muddy. I think if you tweaked the color towards a darker hue like orange you'd retain those original bright colours.
Finally: blank white canvas! Ewww. Your pics would benefit if you either backed it on a neutral colour like grey (so that the whites in your image are the brightest things in the whole pic, and not the rest of the canvas), or on a simple background (subtle gradient, etc.) to make it look extra impressive.