At 8/22/10 02:44 AM, PhyroDragon wrote:
Can you give me any tips on what I should concentrate on improving for this year's entry?
First and foremost... you have to remember that all pieces will go into a 'frame' of some sort. So by adding the (way too prominent) logo type and black bars across the top & bottom, you basically made yours unusable. Yeah, we could have asked you to remove them, but we assume what's posted in the art thread is your final submission, and we judge it as such.
As for the actual content... it's somewhat unbalanced and random (unless that was intentional, in which case you should have pushed it even more) ...and I don't get the dots all around the figures. Might have been cool if you had used that technique for the shading ...to give it that comic book vibe, ya know? You had a good idea... it just didn't quite come together.