At 8/9/10 10:39 AM, Danopus wrote:
Leafeon also says Sup Dawg.
Drawn in a random iScribble board.
On this drawing and the one before it, your shading doesn't reflect the musculature of the animals. You don't need to make them extremely muscular, but if you're going to shade, then it should represent the depressions, bumps and shadows made by the different muscles and features. It also doesn't represent any direction of light, especially on the most recent one.
At 8/7/10 12:47 PM, Danopus wrote:
Basically he likes gold and hes a dick and his shirt symbol is the alchemical symbol for gold. He says he's blue blood but really he's orange.
On this drawing the folds of the cloth don't fall naturally. Consider using a reference. Also, the minimal shading that's only on the edges of the face makes it look too geometric. And again, direction of light isn't represented.