Hello, for my first art forum in Newgrounds I'll be presenting some of my wicked art to all of you out there. Hope you all digs~~
I really like the camera angle you've got on him, and the arm helps bring it to life. Your proportions look accurate too! I would suggest to use some slightly brighter colors for his clothing. The white in the front really grabbed my attention and sort of put him out of focus.
"Animation is not the art of drawings that move, but the art of movements that are drawn." -Norman McLaren
At 10/18/09 12:50 PM, PBass wrote: I really like the camera angle you've got on him, and the arm helps bring it to life. Your proportions look accurate too! I would suggest to use some slightly brighter colors for his clothing. The white in the front really grabbed my attention and sort of put him out of focus.
Thanks for being my first commenter. Yeah, I see many wrong aspects in this picture. Anyway here's more~~=)
Not bad, not bad. I was going through your art that you've submitted to the portal. Interesting stuff, although I see that you using the line tool for nearly everything. Try drawing out some shapes free-hand.
At 10/18/09 01:10 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote: Not bad, not bad. I was going through your art that you've submitted to the portal. Interesting stuff, although I see that you using the line tool for nearly everything. Try drawing out some shapes free-hand.
Umm I tried that...and it sucks...-_-" ....But I'll try again. Thanks for your encouragement!!
another art~~
i quite like the stuff here and it does have a cubist kinda feel to it.
At 10/18/09 01:24 PM, JustJoshy wrote: i quite like the stuff here and it does have a cubist kinda feel to it.
Thanks~~ I kinda forming lots of cubes lately~~=)
More drawing~~
At 10/18/09 01:38 PM, TaraGraphics wrote: More drawing~~
That film got me into ghibli- delicious drawing!
I really like this stuff, I look forward to see more.
No mate, no.
At 10/18/09 03:00 PM, JoeTheToucan wrote:At 10/18/09 01:38 PM, TaraGraphics wrote: More drawing~~That film got me into ghibli- delicious drawing!
I really like this stuff, I look forward to see more.
If it's delicious I recommend you eat it~~lalalala....Thanks for the comment~~=)
Moar arts~~
ugh this stuff gets tiring fast. Instead of the line tool(and even if you are not using it) try makig things a little smoother. This stuff is pretty unappealing. And it limits what you can do if you stick with this style.
if you don't have anything interesting to say, don't say anything at all
At 10/28/09 01:50 PM, falz3333 wrote: ugh this stuff gets tiring fast. Instead of the line tool(and even if you are not using it) try makig things a little smoother. This stuff is pretty unappealing. And it limits what you can do if you stick with this style.
ALLLRIGHTTTT=)!!
I think your a showing some definite progress... I dont know if you posted these images as you made them, or even in that order, but every next one seems to be better than the one before it.
not excluding the no-face that is... that one is just plain rad.
Your last one is the best imo, especially the character in the bottom left corner. coincidentally you didnt stick to the angled lines thing that much in there....
Its nice to have a style to make your art stand out from other poeples art, and it can really add an extra dimension to your drawings. but in the end, its still about the drawings not about the style. your style should service the drawings so to say.
NEVER LOOSE FAITH IN MANCUNT
Ignore what most say.
The line style had such a distuinguished look to it, that if you sjowed me a picture i could probably immediatly tell if it was yours.
If thats you style than just let it be. =]
I Draw With My Mouse.
At 10/28/09 06:28 PM, FutureMode wrote: Ignore what most say.
The line style had such a distuinguished look to it, that if you sjowed me a picture i could probably immediatly tell if it was yours.
If thats you style than just let it be. =]
I someone knew this is my style, I would know that is you.=)
At 10/28/09 06:28 PM, FutureMode wrote: Ignore what most say.
The line style had such a distuinguished look to it, that if you sjowed me a picture i could probably immediatly tell if it was yours.
If thats you style than just let it be. =]
I agree, the line style is just that, a style. I think you should just do some of it without the line tool but I don't think it'll do your style justice.
I think one of the only things I don't like about your drawings is the weird perspectives, it's cool sometimes but seeing similar foreshortening each time is kinda like a "Where's Waldo" book with Waldo completely covering each page of the book.
Who is the hunter?
Woah...
This is really neat stuff, with a very unique style. I like how in the last picture you moved away from the earlier camera angles. They were neat, but doing every picture like that takes away from the uniqueness. But seriously, great stuff man.
This looks froody.
At 10/29/09 12:14 PM, XIII13 wrote: Woah...
This is really neat stuff, with a very unique style. I like how in the last picture you moved away from the earlier camera angles. They were neat, but doing every picture like that takes away from the uniqueness. But seriously, great stuff man.
Ok, will do better!!=)
At 10/29/09 12:14 PM, XIII13 wrote: Woah...
This is really neat stuff, with a very unique style. I like how in the last picture you moved away from the earlier camera angles. They were neat, but doing every picture like that takes away from the uniqueness. But seriously, great stuff man.
I don't see how it takes away from the uniqueness. If anything, it separates his style from the rest of the people.
great work I love it.
almost has a beboy feel to it.
as most said, just work on the perspective and you will rock it. the naruto one is my favorite because the perspective is just dead on
At 10/30/09 05:02 AM, MindChamber wrote: great work I love it.
almost has a beboy feel to it.
as most said, just work on the perspective and you will rock it. the naruto one is my favorite because the perspective is just dead on
Wah...Thank you veryx1000000 Much!!!!=)
This is a proper mint art thread, I'm forever looking forward to what you come out with next.
Ace art mate!
No mate, no.
After seeing more of your art, I'm getting to dig your style. Keep it up, and like everyone else has said, work a bit on the perspective, and it will be perfect.
Thank you joe, I will post more! =)
I'll work my best big-johnny-thirteen!!
It looks good, but it seems to lack the detailing in most of your images. It actually reminds me of:
The Animatrix: World Record.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0GQfs2IS7 bk
So even as an animated style. It works.
