At 6/14/09 02:28 PM, Mexifry wrote:

At 6/14/09 01:45 PM, SciutoAV wrote: Wow, once 14hourlunchbreak said, "There will be 10 co-authors." everybody went into overhaul mode and the quality just sky rocketed.

We should all make our parts the best we can.

14hourlunchbreak's trophy cabinet is lookin a little empty and we needa change that. :)

I'm pretty satisfied with mine, quality always comes first for me.

Which is why I have yet to submit anything to the portal, most of the stuff I've done in flash is the kind of things you'd find on dagobah.biz

At 6/14/09 03:51 PM, DrClay wrote: here you go :3

hey thanks man, you saved my life :)

i hope it goes well. But 5 secodns is short enough so that random can be funny
but also so that it can be like, wat the fuck?

i just hope people dont look at alot of the stuff and wonder wtf it is, espcially since they only have 5 seconds to take it in...

Oooerr...

I just hope we don't get assholes who just will vote zero for no reason

At 6/14/09 04:59 PM, Mexifry wrote: Here's some instruction on how to it.

1. The first and last part of the collab need to be the best. This is for the people who watch like 8 seconds and then close and vote so they see the absolute best when they first watch it. The end part is to remind the rest of the viewers before they go vote that there is quality.

I know the perfect one to go first. It's not the best and it's not the worst, but it fits perfectly with the collab. Like, when I watched it, I said "Wow, I could ask for nothing more." Also, the voice acting was just so awesome.

Also, I promised someone that their part could go last. It's pretty good anyway.

At 6/14/09 05:23 PM, DrClay wrote: I just hope we don't get assholes who just will vote zero for no reason

No one zeroes collabs.

Newgrounds doesn't know how to vote properly. BTW, I made a flash that is balls to the walls cool. It stars sonic the hedgehog fighting dark mario.

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  Timmy goes SS3

  by SciutoAV

  The bane of sprite dbz movies.

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  (Ages 17+)

here's my second submission :)

Here's the viewable version...
and here's the fla file.

that's all from me i'm afraid! :)

I wouldn't worry about getting a low score.

Most of these shorts are pretty hilarious, and voters tend to lean towards that.

At 6/14/09 06:28 PM, EJRProductions wrote: Fix lip-sync.

Like, completely redo it, or just fix it slightly? I'm tired haha

At 6/14/09 06:32 PM, Gojiralph wrote:

At 6/14/09 06:28 PM, EJRProductions wrote: Fix lip-sync.

Like, completely redo it, or just fix it slightly? I'm tired haha

I would completely redo it, or atleast have it open and close (shrink actually) at the right moments :3

At 6/14/09 06:33 PM, DrClay wrote: I would completely redo it, or atleast have it open and close (shrink actually) at the right moments :3

Ahhh ok, I hate lipsyncing so much!!!! I swear its like the hardest part of animating :'(

At 6/14/09 06:37 PM, Gojiralph wrote:

At 6/14/09 06:33 PM, DrClay wrote: I would completely redo it, or atleast have it open and close (shrink actually) at the right moments :3

Ahhh ok, I hate lipsyncing so much!!!! I swear its like the hardest part of animating :'(

I could help you if you want :3

At 6/14/09 06:38 PM, DrClay wrote: I could help you if you want :3

If thats ok, I'd hate to ruin your voice with my half-assed lipsyncing! I think it would be best to stay in the style as well if thats all coolio :)

At 6/14/09 06:42 PM, Gojiralph wrote: If thats ok, I'd hate to ruin your voice with my half-assed lipsyncing! I think it would be best to stay in the style as well if thats all coolio :)

Yeah sure. I don't quite know what your answer is... XD

At 6/14/09 01:45 PM, SciutoAV wrote: Wow, once 14hourlunchbreak said, "There will be 10 co-authors." everybody went into overhaul mode and the quality just sky rocketed.

Indeed :D I'm probably not going to be a co-author, but i'm fine with that :) Buuttt... If I were to be co-authored, that would be awesome :D

I hope the lip synching is better :)

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/150609/3 437_Gojiralph_5secondcollab2.php

At 6/14/09 08:12 PM, Mexifry wrote: GAH!
Icannot get this part of the lip sync to be smoother. :(
It just looks awkward right now.

awkward lip sync

Any suggestions to make it less gross looknig? lol

I had that problem a minute ago, I'm still not entirely happy with mine :'( but.. i guess you could just change how long the mouth shapes are shown for, or you could tween the sizes of them about a bit i guess. Or you could hope nobody notices :3

At 6/14/09 08:12 PM, Mexifry wrote: GAH!
Icannot get this part of the lip sync to be smoother. :(
It just looks awkward right now.

awkward lip sync

I dunno why, but I can't stop watching that

At 6/14/09 08:26 PM, DrClay wrote:

At 6/14/09 08:12 PM, Mexifry wrote: GAH!
Icannot get this part of the lip sync to be smoother. :(
It just looks awkward right now.

awkward lip sync

I dunno why, but I can't stop watching that

Same here man, same here. I really do not think that we have to worry about this getting a low score. I'm guessing that we'll get around a 4, which would be pretty cool. I'm going to give the list one final update in a little and then let the collab work itself out in the next couple of days.

At 6/14/09 08:27 PM, Mexifry wrote:

At 6/14/09 08:25 PM, EJRProductions wrote: And Mexifry, just tween the mouth parts I guess. Make bigger mouth positions tween into small ones and small to big ones.

Or you could try to find a tutorial and copy the mouth movements.

It's not just the mouth movements that are my problem, it's also the jerkiness of it all.
I haven't lip synced in ages so this is prolly why it is so bad. :p

Im havin my good ol pal Nogfish take a look at it.

Wow, I'm glad your putting so much effort into your part! To think it's only 5 seconds. I can't wait to see the final thing. :3

At 6/14/09 03:23 PM, ChaoticTrashCan wrote: 3rd and final one. Really ADD. What do you think?

Truely Awesome!
I love this

Good god, i hope that's everything sorted out now haha

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/150609/6 139_Gojiralph_5secondcollab2.php

At 6/14/09 08:55 PM, Gojiralph wrote: Good god, i hope that's everything sorted out now haha

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/150609/6 139_Gojiralph_5secondcollab2.php

That's really good! The lip syncing is much better now. If you're all done, you can upload the FLA to MegaUpload and PM me the link to it!

At 6/14/09 08:59 PM, 14hourlunchbreak wrote: That's really good! The lip syncing is much better now. If you're all done, you can upload the FLA to MegaUpload and PM me the link to it!

Thanks :) I'll just do that now :)

At 6/14/09 09:02 PM, Gojiralph wrote:

At 6/14/09 08:59 PM, 14hourlunchbreak wrote: That's really good! The lip syncing is much better now. If you're all done, you can upload the FLA to MegaUpload and PM me the link to it!

Thanks :) I'll just do that now :)

Cool, thanks. I'm logging off, so don't worry if I don't reply. I'll check it out in mornin'.

Any rules against stupid-as-all-get out Pokemanz parodies?

At 6/14/09 09:52 PM, Mexifry wrote:

At 6/14/09 09:48 PM, Izzy712 wrote: Any rules against stupid-as-all-get out Pokemanz parodies?

I have problem with it, but it's not my choice.

What problems do you have with it? Please, do tell :)

At 6/14/09 10:24 PM, Mexifry wrote:

At 6/14/09 10:23 PM, Izzy712 wrote: What problems do you have with it? Please, do tell :)

It lacks originality and there are too many stupid video game parodies on NG.

mmmm, true :D I was thinking about trashing that idea anyways :)

At 6/14/09 10:26 PM, EJRProductions wrote:

At 6/14/09 10:24 PM, Mexifry wrote:

At 6/14/09 10:23 PM, Izzy712 wrote: What problems do you have with it? Please, do tell :)

It lacks originality and there are too many stupid video game parodies on NG.

Yeah. The art is good but it needs more originality. That way people think better of the collab and of the person that made the part.

Are you kidding me? Newgrounds eats up parodies like candy! There's nothing wrong with an *gasp* unoriginal part. Some people like parodies and will be enticed to watch more because of it.

Just look at the Street Fighter Collab. I BARELY found it funny, but it got so much attention because it was based on a video game.

At 6/14/09 10:40 PM, SciutoAV wrote: Just look at the Street Fighter Collab. I BARELY found it funny, but it got so much attention because it was based on a video game.

Wrong, it got alot of attention because alot of the staff and popular artist did it