Hmm

It was pretty good. The only real problems I had were where the wind just ended abruptly instead of slowly fading out. The other problem is the voice. It came in very loud. One thing you might consider is having the wind fade out slowly over time and making the voice softer upon it's entrance.

on the right path

Okay, you've got some very good ideas in here, and the harmonizations work very well in the main part of the song with the combination of the piano and the strings and voice. But one thing is, the female voice is way too loud at the start of the segment, its a real blast.
The bird sounds are a nice touch, but the 'arctic wind'..well, it makes it sound a littl bit rough :) other than that, its a good try. Maybe a bit more reverb on the piano, string and voices, then they'll blend in a bit more.
Well, keep going man, you're on the right track!