Loving the use of foley, I did one yeeeeeeeeeears ago Dark Nite built around a storm.
https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/45613 (4th track i posted here in 2006)
Man, i love this track, it's proper trip hop, it's chill, but upbeat. Kingbastard/myheadisaballoon posts a lot of stuff similar.
It literally tingles my cerebellum, for me it's perfect music. It's well mixed, though the glitch'd bit crushed beat near the end is a bit compressed. I do hear exactly what you're going for and any critique would be preference only.
A vocal, or some vox samples would be killer.