I really don't listen to things like this enough to have a real experienced opinion on it, but I'll go ahead and try anyways.
There's alot of really cool stuff in here, from the breakdown-y part in the middle, to the glitchy sounds right after it, and then the vocal sampling (again), and the glitchy percussion and stuff is awesome.
This might not be completely accurate, but it's my best guess: all the sampled stuff is awesome in this track, but the synth parts aren't great.
The synths create a very specific feel to the track, so that's good. But I just find the sounds you used for the synth parts to be kinda corny and generic. It'd have been cool to have some more uniqueness in there. Of course, you might've wanted them to sound just like they do for a reason I'm not getting, and again, I don't really listen to this genre enough to get it. So take this tiny criticism with a grain of salt, I guess.
Anyways, you're obviously good at this, so keep it up.
Thanks for a great review! I like what you said about the synths and over time, the more i listen to the track, I can agree with you. They are cheesy. I think they fit the track very well and I dont really know what else I would replace them with. Unfortunately, i lost this project when my hard drive crashed. A real bummer because this song was not even done. Thanks s much for your review!
It was very alien, I liked it! You should ad some real instruments though instead of just synths. Like pianos or guitars.