Good composition and you have a pretty good voice...but like everyone said you're barely audible. We can't hear you! Other than that a really nice piece.
good recording, playing, though next time try to like sing in the mic more... its barely audible :P
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Sounds pretty good, but slightly hollow, ie: the way you recorded. How do you record? Could be equalization or something too, i'm not sure. I heard some sort of timing conflict at some point too, but you might of meant to do it. I dunno, sounds cool.
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