you need to work with more types of sounds
the bass sounded VERY shaky and out of place, you need to work with more non basic sounds and maybe a variety of different background and vibrant sounds. This song was completely out of place and sounded like a giant pile of random sounds being played at different times. You gotta look at the timing when to activate the required sounds and complete the verse properly not just throw together sounds hoping they sound good. In my opinion, a rave project should consider of heavy beats and lots of synth shredding.