Hi! You got a few good beats here, though I’m going to give you some things to think about so you can improve your art.
What you have right now is motivation and inspiration. These two attributes are worth one star each. This is why I have given this track a low rating of two stars. Two stars isn’t so bad. It’s better than no stars or even a blam!
With this beatboxing track, I would say you are missing a few things that could bring it to the four-star range which are craft and style. Working toward these two attributes—craft and style—will give you the experience you need to make super awesome stuff! I’m sure you’ll be able to make really great things in the future but to get through your music journey, you’ll need to continue doing what you’re doing now:
- You’re already making cool stuff.
- And you’re already uploading your music tracks to receive feedback from other people.
Now it’s time to take your music even further. And I know that if you develop a music style and you work on techniques, you’ll be able to make tracks that are worthy of a five-star rating by adding that special something that only you could produce.
So basically, if none of that makes sense, I would just say to keep making art. Make art if it’s what you want to do.