Its alright
The beginning was origional and was the prelude to a potentially good song.However the sounds are slight too forced and the Bass needs to be slightly more meaty.
The beat needs to be more constant and possibly less spasmodic at about 1:30-1:50
the Interlude at 2:30 is a great addition by the way but the continuation with the different beat and sounds puts it r off and its then continues to be a little off track.
Its good,But with the potential i hear it could be better