The beginning was origional and was the prelude to a potentially good song.However the sounds are slight too forced and the Bass needs to be slightly more meaty.
The beat needs to be more constant and possibly less spasmodic at about 1:30-1:50
the Interlude at 2:30 is a great addition by the way but the continuation with the different beat and sounds puts it r off and its then continues to be a little off track.
Its good,But with the potential i hear it could be better
It's repeating itself.
The beginning was pretty original I think. But there is nothing more than bunch of sounds forced to this song, without them fitting in.
Itslike a mix of some of the glitchy overtones from DaYoyo with a darke tack, as well as some other insanity. I liked how it is sort of ambient at the same time as being techno. Keep doing the good work.
I don't even listen to techno and this rocked.
The spoken word parts remind me of a track called "Mastermind" by Deltron 3030. Give it a listen. It made me like hip-hop more.
Keep up the good work.
Although I like the use of the duplet and triplet alternation, I feel at times in the middle of the song it was forced. The only other real problem I had with it was the fact that the b section was too.... Simple.. It was just a melody, with rhythm and no counter-melody. If you added a counter-melody and removed some of the forced duple and triple patterns, this would be a great song. 7/10
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.