this is definitely an improvement over the older version.
I think you should take out the voice at the end though, and just have it fade out.
Well, at least you're better than me. ;)
Seriously you are better than me. I don't even know how to do this. I liked it thats for sure.
How To End A Song....
1.) Try repeating the intro again, followed by a ringing strum or tap of the instruments.
2.) Make it a sudden ending, with a loud "bang" with a guitar, or whatever the hell you use.
3.) Repeat the most recent beat near the "ending" of the song, and let it fade out.
Good song, though! Mildly repetitive, but it sounded good so I didn't want to stop listening. I am downloading this. :P
BUT, the ending, never use an automated voice.
Thanks! i still have alot of work to do when it comes to writing music but i'm geting there.
And as for the automated voice... i know.. i really truly know. I needed some type of lyric in the song, and my mic sucks for vocals. So i used the next best thing. i originaly thought that it would add a somber feeling to everything. But it didn't. I decided to keep it in because i wanted to make sure that im just not second guessing myself.
Thanks for the review and i welcome many more!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.