Yup, you gotta finish this piece
Looks promising for a rough cut, but, to be honest, there were boring parts. Maybe it's because it's a rough cut.
Here's my take on this piece:
- To my taste, I'll get a drummer (or a drum machine; it works fine), a bass player, and a lead guitarist to yank the guitar, but not go wild, in the instrumental parts
- Get a backup vocalist that can sing an octave higher than the current vocalist in this piece
- No shouting/screaming, please
Hope this helps. :)