Hrrm

No.. He may be onto something. o_o It's certainly unique, but follows no real melody. It's like background noise, unless that's what you tried for. It also gets kind of repetitive. :/

ehhhhh

the beginning was off the hook, but i was dissapointed as the song continued. its not even a song! Its more like you put a bunch of sound effects together to a drum beat. You did something cool in the middle of it though, but it was still monotonous and dull. nahh i like the donenipple and elektronic melody bettah. :P