Work on your vocals
Everything starts somewhere. For starters, work on your vocals. Then, polish the tones; make sure you're hitting the right notes with your voice -- OFF-NOTES are very noticeable and will hurt your song.
If you intend to have an acoustic setup, it'll be nice to have a shaker, an acoustic bass guitar, and a second voice. Work your lead vocals, and the best of luck to you.
Thanks a lot man. I really appreciate the advice.
Needs a slight change in lyrics
but you could be just like Maroon 5 with sad songs like these. Keep it up! man! Maybe add a base
Yeah I've acutally had a really hard time writing happy songs. Just can't think of any lyrics. Anyway this song summarizes a year and a half of no/crappy relationships I've been writing it for a long time about stuff that actually happened. Thanks for the suggestion about a bass I was actually thinking some congo drums would be cool.