But yeah, I agree with the first two guys who reviewed this track. Interesting intro. After the 13-second mark, I felt that everything went downhill.
Hmm... try cutting each progression in half. Hmm... try adding industrial drums (although that might not be your style).
Visit the mixer/EQ, too. The bass is too weak; doesn't carry the rest of track. I switched from my JBLs to my Sennheiser headset -- can't feel the bass pumping.
Keep the intro the way it is; it's perfect that way.
Hope this helps.
Between the two songs Ive posted, your the FIRST one to offer advice that is actually advice Does no one understand the concept of creative critisim anymore?
u blu it
But I liked the first bit so much, I give you a higher score. Also the 303-ish line wasn't so bad, but it's still overdone to hear the same thing for 3 minutes straight!
You blew it
I was expecting something awesome with that beginning messed up vocal.
I was purely awesome.
I need it.
But the rest was wack, boring, dull, just not worth the time you put into it.